Glorious pegasus master race (Rainbow Factory)

Not even going to bother with excuses. I failed to make noon, just like everything else I’ve attempted in the last week. Hell, this wasn’t even supposed to be this week’s article, this was supposed to be next week’s. Unfortunately, the intended topic of this week’s article is sealed in a box full of poison that can’t be safely opened until Monday night. Anyway…

June is Derivative Works Month, where I take a break from analyzing episodes of Friendship Is Magic and instead analyze a mix of fanworks and officially licensed works other than the show using the same techniques.

Now witness the power of this fully armed and operational…
uh… factory. That makes rainbows. Pretty pretty rainbows.

 It’s August 11, 2011. The top song is LMFAO’s “Party Rock Anthem” and the top movie is the surprisingly good Rise of the Planet of the Apes. In the news this week, the Arab League calls on the Syrian government to stop killing its own civilians, which Syria elects to continue doing; noted whackaloon Michelle Bachmann wins the first contest of the 2012 Presidential election, a poll regarding the Iowa  and on the day the song was released, the London riots of 2011 ended. Season 2 of Friendship Is Magic is a little over a month away.

On YouTube, user WoodenToaster posts the song “Rainbow Factory,” one of the most popular an explosion of brony music that to an extent is still ongoing. (At time of writing, the YouTube posting has over 1.9 million views, 17,000 “likes,” and 300 “dislikes.”) The song is dark, with heavy distortion on both instrumentation and the male singer (presumably WoodenToaster)’s voice. The subject matter is the Rainbow Factory, a feature of the city of Cloudsdale first seen in Season One’s “Sonic Rainboom,” where that city’s pegasus inhabitants convert pools of liquid color into the rainbows they distribute across Equestria. The song implies that there is some sinister secret to the factory; lines like “Now a rainbow’s tale isn’t quite as nice/As the story we knew of sugar and spice” and “In the Rainbow Factory, where your fears and horrors come true/In the Rainbow Factory, where not a single soul gets through” make it very clear that something awful is happening to make these rainbows, but leave precisely what up to the imagination of the listener.

However, I am not particularly qualified to analyze music (which is to say, I am even less qualified to analyze music than I am to analyze animation, hard as it may be to believe that such a thing is possible). Fortunately, there is a fanfiction based on the song, and implicitly endorsed by WoodenToast, seeing as the YouTube page for the song links to the fic.

So: It is December 27, 2011. The top song is Rihanna’s “We Found Love” and the top movie is Mission Impossible 4. In the news, Boko Haram engages in a series of attacks on Nigerian churches during Christian prayers, killing 39, and by New Year’s Eve, President Goodluck Jonathon declares a state of emergency in several cities; following the state funeral of Kim Jung-il, his son, Kim Jung-un, is acknowledged as Supreme Leader of North Korea; and Turkey accidentally kills 35 smugglers that they thought were guerillas during airstrikes on Kurdish militants. We are almost precisely at the midpoint of the three-week hiatus following “Hearth’s Warming Eve.”

“Rainbow Factory,” the story by AuroraDawn, is somewhat less popular than the song: 73,000 views, 2,000 “likes,” and 150 “dislikes.” Still, that is an impressive readership for a fic in a relatively small and young fandom, and an overwhelmingly positive response. Neither the story’s description on FIMFiction nor the story itself link to the song, but the debt is quite clear, not only in the title but in the use of lyrics from the song as section-heading epigraphs throughout the story.
However, the story departs from the song quite significantly, mostly by making explicit what the song only implies, as well as by having characters. It is primarily told from the perspective of Scootaloo, now a young adult just out of flight school. As it opens, she is taking her final exam along with a group of other ponies, all of whom believe that ponies who fail their exam are exiled to some distant city. After the first pegasus to attempt the test, Aurora Dawn, injures herself and fails, she is ignored and left to struggle with broken wings. Scootaloo’s friend Orion Solstice attempts the test as well, but abandons it to help Aurora Dawn, earning an automatic failure; this then distresses Scootaloo so much that she is distracted during the test and fails. The three ponies are thus, following an elaborate and seemingly pointless ruse in which they are escorted out of the city by ponies who don’t know where “exiles are sent,” then back into the city by Rainbow Factory guards, shipped off to the Rainbow Factory’s secret levels, where they learn that the most obvious and least interesting possible implication of the song is true: rainbows are made by painfully sacrificing ponies.

Scootaloo confronts the head of the program, who turns out to be Rainbow Dash, who in turn rejects Scootaloo and all the pegasi who fail the examination as being worthless and unworthy of the high standards of Cloudsdale. Scootaloo and the other two newcomers attempt to organize a mass breakout of the imprisoned pegasi, only Scootaloo makes it back alive, but she makes a wrong turn in her escape attempt and is recaptured and fed into the rainbow machine.

One has to act: what is this story for? If its purpose is to shock, it fails; it is fairly predictable throughout, with the only real surprise being Rainbow Dash, and even that is obvious in hindsight: this is a story of adults betraying their children, so of course if the story is told from the perspective of Scootaloo, the adult closest to her has to be the one in charge. The violence, while there is a great deal of it, never feels particularly visceral, and is nothing special for a gorefic, so it fails to be shocking in that sense, as well.

Mostly, though, it fails to shock because it is not horrible violence happening to or being perpatrated by characters we care about. The society depicted, in which the culture of Cloudsdale is defined by perfectionism justified by constant repetition of the glory and excellence of Cloudsdale pegasi, bears no resemblance to the Equestria we see in the show, and despite a handwave that years of running the Rainbow Factory has twisted Rainbow Dash’s elitism into extreme hatred of those she sees as inferior, the Rainbow Dash we see defending Fluttershy from bullies in flashbacks in “The Cutie Mark Chronicles” would never work with the factory in the first place. In addition, that the flight school teachers stand by and do nothing for the injured Aurora Dawn, and expect the examinees to do likewise, is utterly unlike the group behavior of ponies as seen in the show. On FIMFiction, this is marked as an “alternate universe” story, presumably in acknowledgment of precisely those issues–these don’t act like our Rainbow Dash or our pegasi because they’re not.

These choices, or at least choices like them, are probably necessary. It is difficult to imagine a scenario in which the Rainbow Factory could have a dark and violent secret without at least some contradiction of the Equestria and characters depicted in the show. But unfortunately that means that these are not the familiar characters, and so the story cannot simply assume that we care about them before it starts slaughtering them. These aren’t the Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo in whose adventures I’ve become invested through years of watching the show; these are conglomerations of words who happen to have the same names and physical descriptions.

Which then raises the natural question raised by any alternate universe story: Why bother? Why not write an original story about original characters, rather than fanfiction with only a tenuous connection to the original work? For that matter, why bother with pony grimdark or gorefic to begin with? Certainly, if one has a taste for violence and darkness, they can be found in abundance in other media, so why add it to one of the few works where they are largely lacking?

One rather upsetting possibility lies in one of the main collective anxieties of the brony community, the fear of being seen as unmasculine or “gay.” Bronies are a largely (about 80 percent) masculine community centered on a decidedly feminine show, so there is a fairly widespread narrative within the brony community that “outsiders” will attack bronies for stepping outside of the masculine gender role. And, certainly, this has occurred–there are multiple well-documented cases of younger bronies being bullied using transphobic or homophobic slurs, with Michael Morones perhaps the best-known. One possible response is to try to make the show more masculine, and one way to do so in a culture that equates power, dominance, and masculinity is by adding violence, i.e. the expression of dominance through the exercise of physical power. Adding violence to the show is, in a sense, doing violence to the show, thus asserting masculine-coded dominance over it. It also handily provides fans a way to defend themselves from accusations of being insufficiently masculine by providing a counter-example, “See, it’s not all ‘girly’ friendship and feelings and being a better person, some it is hardcore ‘manly’ death and pain!” (The sad irony here is, of course, that the most common criticisms of bronies as a community have nothing to do with gender roles; the primary criticisms of bronies by non-bronies are that they’re  self-satisfied, over-aggressive, easily wounded, and misogynistic.)

A somewhat more generous reading is available, however, if we consider the theory of the grotesque. First explored by the critic Mikhail Bakhtin in the middle third of the twentieth century, the concept of the grotesque is intimately interconnected with another of Bakhtin’s concepts, the carnivalesque or carnivalization, which in turn is one of the core elements of postmodernism. One can thus argue that the grotesque is, in a sense, a mostly latent part of Friendship Is Magic‘s DNA, waiting to be activated in fanworks.

The grotesque is essentially a form of satire, using the distortion of the human (or in this case, pony) form to degrade that which is usually elevated, dragging the high down to the low. This is part of the aesthetic of carnival, in which social structures and ideologies are torn down and chaos and humor reign. The contradiction of the show’s values within the story can thus be read as deliberate, part of this process of tearing down in order to achieve a carnivalesque state in which those values can be interrogated.

But again, this violence is not occurring within something recognizable as the show, so whose values are it questioning? What authority is brought down and satirized by this grotesque violence?

The answer may lie in another question: In what community might one receive constant messages celebrating and asserting the excellence of all individuals in the community, while at the same time knowing that those who fail those standards of excellence will be thrown out? A community, further, devoted to the creation of a product, and which one must belong to or else be considered worthless and deserving of death?

Worded that way, it should be fairly apparent: this is not the Cloudsdale in the show because it is the Cloudsdale Corporation. The satire is not of the show as a work of art, so much as it is a satire of the show as a corporate product. The values being brought down are thus not actually the values of the show, but of Hasbro and all entities like it: profit, the mechanization and dehumanization of workers into human resources, and the greedy devouring of those resources by a system that is overseen and governed by the powerful elite but appears capable of acting on its own.

Rejected by the system for failing to measure up to arbitrary standards, the young adults of corporatist Cloudsdale are discarded as worthless. No one much cares what happens to them, and indeed the powers that be believe they deserve to die. This is exaggerated and melodramatized, certainly, but at the same time it is a rough description of how our society treats the unemployed, and the recent graduates who are both the most likely demographic to be unemployed and the most likely demographic to be bronies.

Other readings are of course available; this is simply an example of one. It is in the nature of the carnivalesque to tear down all ideologies, and the grotesqueries contained within can thus be read as satire of almost any aspect of society, according to the ideology of the reader and their preferred targets. The grotesque is thus, in a sense, a mirror held up to the reader.

Mirrors can be valuable things, so despite being distasteful, somewhat boring, and in need of a good proofread, a myriad of redemptive readings of the story “Rainbow Factory” are available. Or just listen to the song, it seems like it’s probably a good example of whatever genre it is, if that genre is your thing.

10 thoughts on “Glorious pegasus master race (Rainbow Factory)

  1. Kit and I were exploring notions of how this fix can exist and expand canon ideas about Cloudsdale and foster more creativity.

    It's still my favorite of the various “grim dark” fics out there.

    I'm reading a book on the Grotesque right now, so my Connecticon panel on grim dark ponies sounds at least a little bit professional.

  2. Well, it's the shortest one I've seen. As far as I'm concerned, that makes it near-automatically the best grimdark pony fic. =P

    More seriously, what book?

  3. The best Grimdark Pony fanfics are PONY.MOV (which is also an AU spoof) and Forensics is Magic (a detective drama). Have you perused those.

  4. I definitely rec Forensics is Magic also. And Pony.MOV is pure gold.

    The book is called “Grotesque: The New Critical Idiom.” I found it while looking for books on penny dreadfuls and dime fiction in the 19th century.

  5. J.S.: I've seen the .MOV movies, was underwhelmed. Basically just Adult Swim-style shock humor, which has long ago ceased to be shocking and therefore ceased to be funny. Forensics Is Magic is a new one on me, I'll check that out.

    Anime Anthropologist: Definitely going to have to take a look at that book before I tackle Book 3.

  6. n/m, saw the disclaimer at the beginning of Forensics Is Magic that said familiarity with Cupcakes and its alternate endings is required. Reading one pony grimdark is bad enough, I ain't reading twelve.

  7. Froborr, if you're still reading this that disclaimer is Bullshit. I've never read Cupcakes or it's alternate endings and I didn't lose anything. You only need working knowledge of Cupcakes (the picture and the fact that's it's Pinkie Pie kills Rainbow Dash). It does however, heavily homage one non-pony comic which I know you've read and won't dare spoil. Also it gives a genius (and show accurate from a point of view) alternate character interpretation of one of the other characters.

  8. I had previously mentally compared The Rainbow Factory to Nazi Germany, but your comparison of it to corporations and the workforce makes it feel like it hits a lot closer to home.

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